The reason this election is historic is because this was the first African American ever elected and he was very serious about this election, he made some good changes. Also i really liked how he really wants to stop the war and i think he should that its really good for us because theres parents in there houses right now just thinking bout there kids like how there kids could end up dead with out them knowing whats even going on. I know that he really took this president thing very serious because like all of the good speeches that he have gave to make people really like him and think that he is the best. And i really was happy when i heard that Obama won because i really think that he will make a change in this world. I think that he should really change the educations and schools of the kids and work really on making us wanna go to college.
Obama will do good in America in the next 4 year because i really believe in him and all the things that he have said and done made him look like a very responsible person. Also i hope that he stops this war because it is killing a lot of Innocent people from America.
Obama will do good in America in the next 4 year because i really believe in him and all the things that he have said and done made him look like a very responsible person. Also i hope that he stops this war because it is killing a lot of Innocent people from America.
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Carlos i really like the way you use the powerful words. For example:he uses the word hope and i also like the way you believe on what he promise he would do.
Hi Carlos,
You gave a strong reason for why the ware should be over. Also, I like how you indicated how Obama should try to have an impact on education. You backed up your ideas with examples.
Do you think that the President can make more kids want to go to college?
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-Mr. Levy
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